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I'm sorry if your single click today brings u to this crap.
but personally this photo is among my personal favourite.
Last week a friend ask me to write a lyric for their band.
a song not for commercial stuff or wutever. just song.
it's been quite a long time since my last piece.
but it's kinda exciting to get to do this kinda stuff again.

so, last tuesday i bought this "blowing balloon" that i used to
play when i was a kid. so, me n my frens we were blowing the balloon
from the tiny yellow strow.. just playing and watch it as it blows.

I am happy.
sometimes, it's the simplest thing that make u happy
The smells of that balloons brings back memories.
I see the other side of my view inside those translucent balloon.
i see poetry.
The words keep wandering in my head.

Last night i put it on paper;



Translucent

Like a translucent balloon, my heart story
I feel the emotion inside
Can be seen but can’t be touch

Like a translucent balloon, his story
I can see light from his face
But can’t feel the poise in his soul

Like a translucent balloon, their story
A song long enough to be keep
Only waiting to be sing

Like a translucent balloon, life story
A devastate dream
In solitude it stays
Wait for its time to fly away…


~ z a t i h a z i r a
12:58pm Friday, November 16, 2007



Then I was thinking to translate this piece into
malay language and add some words for the lyric.
This is basically my first time
writing in malay, but i think i kinda like it.
might write something again in malay someday...



Lutsinar

Bagai belon lutsinar, cerita hati
Ada perang emosi
Yang dipendam sendiri

Terbanglah, terbang….
Biar angin bawa cerita hati

Bagai belon lutsinar, cerita dia
Dari wajah aku lihat sinar
Cuma kepastiannya belum kurasa

Terbanglah, terbang….
Bawa cerita dia ke sini

Bagai belon lutsinar, cerita mereka
Yang lama tersimpan
Belum mampu terluahkan

Terbanglah, terbang….
bawakan cerita mereka ke awan

Bagai belon lutsinar, cerita kehidupan
Impian insan
Menanti keberanian
Demi sebuah jawapan

Terbanglah, terbang….
Bawa mimpi ini
Akan ku tunggu ia kembali…

~ zatihazira



p/s: I'm sorry for the long description dat u might not
even read and the crappy
abstract photo...


blergghhh... wutever. i love it!

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:aww:

btw can't u translate it into indonesian language:D

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I use Narcissism to mean only preoccupation with my self :flirty:
:iconjuleha:
mistype...

can't=can :D

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I use Narcissism to mean only preoccupation with my self :flirty:
:iconreddishblack:
oww ju.. :hug: sorry... zati masih belum pandai bhasa indonesia... i'm still learning.. maybe u could help me too ya :D

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It's time to pick up your gun.
:iconjuleha:
maybe :D

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I use Narcissism to mean only preoccupation with my self :flirty:
:iconreddishblack:
thank you :blackrose:

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It's time to pick up your gun.
:iconarya-dwipangga:
aliran musiknya apa tuh zatti, Rock malay kah :?
btw yg niup balon sapa :D
you expert play with the texture, wah I can do like that :(

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Klan of ~darkviantart
my home =pontianakdeviant ~pontisquad
:iconreddishblack:
hurm... alternative i guess.. sth like dat.. maybe indie.. dunno yet. those guys play pretty much everything. english n malay :D

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It's time to pick up your gun.
:iconarya-dwipangga:
coool, Zatti be come vocalisnya donk :D

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Klan of ~darkviantart
my home =pontianakdeviant ~pontisquad
:iconreddishblack:
saya nyanyi??? hujan terusss ntar... :rofl:

lupa mau jawap... ya zati la yg tiup belonnya.. kenapa sih?

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It's time to pick up your gun.

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